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Dime a Dozen Porno by *newbones:iconnewbones:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed




At least twice as much
as any girl needs
one enters smoothly
the other proceeds
to tear apart flesh
bringing girl to her knees
then she opens her mouth
to let the third be
inside her somehow
though no one can see
the damage that's done
spreading thin so thoughtlessly
while moans of pleasure drown
her strained weakened plea
to be Loved from a distance
yet held like a baby.
©2008-2009 *newbones
:iconnewbones:

Author's Comments

Please, please, please let me, let me get what I want...

What do YOU think it's about?

Inspired by so many things.

(In the photo I am conveniently holding a $5.00 bill. In life, there are no coincidences. Everything leads to everything else. Sometimes I fucking hate it. Other times, it's the only comforting feeling left in the world.)

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:icontheyarespies:
~theyarespies Jan 31, 2008, 4:17:09 PM
is this about a threesome? it certainly seems that way. :)

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Of course we're out of time, we were never in it to begin with.
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*newbones Jan 31, 2008, 9:42:23 PM
More like 3 guys one girl but that's not what it's actually about if you know what I mean :P

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Hope it's right when you die: old and boney.
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~theyarespies Jan 31, 2008, 10:16:01 PM
Voyeurism? I may not be catchin' it. Either way you have me re-reading this thing a handful of times.

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Of course we're out of time, we were never in it to begin with.
:iconnewbones:
*newbones Jan 31, 2008, 10:19:06 PM
It's not really about sex.

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Hope it's right when you die: old and boney.
:icontheyarespies:
~theyarespies Feb 1, 2008, 12:23:14 AM
'Kay, Montaigne.

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Of course we're out of time, we were never in it to begin with.
:iconnewbones:
*newbones Feb 1, 2008, 1:25:05 AM
kay.

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Hope it's right when you die: old and boney.
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~kvandep Feb 2, 2008, 10:38:05 AM
I know I don't completely understand what you've written here because it's so utterly personal, but I've read it a couple times and in my own interpretation I really get a sense of what kind of position you've been in lately in life. I don't know if I'm totally off or right on the ball and either way I don't really care, this is beautifully personal. I think whatever individual interpretations people can achieve from this is a kind of writer's magic in itself you've seen to tapped into. Great work Bailey! :heart:

p.s. oh yeah and the five dollar bill mention is completely throwing me off too.
:iconnewbones:
*newbones Feb 2, 2008, 7:57:53 PM
My position lately in life... yes sirree bob. sigh.

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Hope it's right when you die: old and boney.
:iconluminousmoon:
~luminousmoon Feb 3, 2008, 6:17:41 PM
I really like the last two lines. I wish I had more input. ^-^

--
We make for your sake such things as stand fast,
Through the ages these pages forever will last.
On blank paper the printer sets down what is heard,
Giving life to what's rife with the power of the word. -Michael Kongehl
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